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期末复习，高中英语满分记叙文！写好一篇英语记叙文要做到以下几点：1、故事发展符合逻辑 2、语言连贯 3、段落结构安排清晰合理 4、句式丰富，多用短语和高级词汇 4、无语法和拼写错误。由此看来，写好一篇英语记叙文并非易事呢，关键还是要多看、多积累、多思考、多写。一对一辅导小好已把下面作文中好的短语和句型标红加粗，同学们可记下来供自己写作之用。  写作要求 你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。 注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。 生词： 指南针：compass n. 手电筒：flashlight n. 急救包：first-aid kit 宿营地：campsite n. 【超优秀满分范文】 Saturday， May 4， 2002 Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday， and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school. The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both， which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. Just before the dawn， we set out on foot in high spirits. Li Ming brought a compass and a tent as well along in his backpack， and I was carrying a flashlight， a map， a knife ， a first-aid kit， some matches， candles， food， and clothing that were all indispensable for the adventure. The path to the campsite was fraught with more difficulties and obstacles than we had expected. On the way to the campsite lay a hill， and we succeeded in climbing it over. After that，we were caught by a rushing river. Fortunately， near the bank we happened to find a wooden board on which we placed our backpacks， and we swam across the river， pushing the wooden board ahead. On the opposite bank of the river stretched a forest in which we got lost. Thanks to the compass， we turned out to tell the right direction and made our way to the campsitein the end. The dark setting in， Li Ming was busy putting up the tent while I set about making a fire and preparing the food. 翻译及分析 1. took part in 参加 2. set out on foot in high spirits 情绪高涨地步行出发 3. that were all indispensable for the adventure 对于这次冒险来说都是必不可少的（定语从句，修饰a flashlight， a map， a knife ， a first-aid kit， some matches， candles， food， and clothing） 4. was fraught with 充满......的 5. On the way to the campsite lay a hill. 一座山位于去营地的路上。（此句为完全倒装句） 6. happened to find a wooden board 碰巧发现一块木板 7. On the opposite bank of the river stretched a forest 在河对岸有一片森林。（此句为完全倒装句） 8. Thanks to 幸亏，由于 9. made our way to the campsite 成功到达营地 10. setting in 到来 11. was busy putting up the tent 忙着搭建帐篷 12. set about making a fire and preparing the food 着手生活和准备食物 来源：根据网络资料整理如涉及版权，请及时联系删除内容！ 让教育回归家庭，给现实的世界寻找一个希望的出口--超级在线1对1！ 找1对1辅导老师，就来！不用奔波，在家就好！ (责任编辑：admin) |