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高考英语作文是很多考生的难点，为了帮助大家更好的备考英语，小编整理出2016高考优秀英语作文赏析，希望考生能在历年优秀作文中学到高分经验，取得好成绩。  假设你是中华中学一名中学生，最近你正在参与一个研究性学习研究调查，调查课题为“关于父母是否对孩子感到骄傲” 1.简要描述这些数据 2.分析该原因 【范文】 A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud oftheir children are twenty percent more than the children who considerthemselves as pridesof their parents. There exist two reasons， which mayaccountforthis subtle difference. First，conservative Chinese parents arenever accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud oftheir kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence.Second， the currenteducational system excessivelyemphasizes the value of academic performance， thus forcing children toextensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make theirparents proud. This biasunfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports， which easilyfrustrateschildren and rendersthem more likely to underestimate themselves. Without the genuineencouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up. 范文共149字，包括了题干中要求的两个部分，并且作为文章主要段落的第二段脉络和结构也清晰可辨。段首句交代有两大原因，下文也有两大原因明显的提示词，并且每个原因都阐述合理且饱满。 再关注一下范文的用词，不难发现短短的150字文章中藏有很多亮点，不仅有考纲词汇的巧妙运用，还有平时课上讲解过的高考高频词汇对基础词汇的替换运用，使得整篇文章的文字表现生动且精彩。 (责任编辑：admin) |