2018高考英语作文如何备考,2017高考全国卷II优秀英语作文赏析
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距离2018年高考还剩下不到1个月的时间,高考英语作文是难点。如何在短时间内提高作文分数呢?背诵是一个非常有效的方式。为了帮助大家更好的备考英语作文,小编整理出2017年全国II卷高考英语作文范文,希望考生能在历年优秀作文中学到高分经验,取得好成绩。 ![]() 2017高考全国II卷 优秀范文 分数:24分四川德阳中学 DearHenry I'mLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowI'mgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast. Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichis"beautyofChina",willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Notonlywillourclub'sworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture. Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply. Bestwishes! Yours, LiHua 1.逻辑性较好,层次分明,连贯恰当; 2.运用词块、句型丰富; 3.个别用词需要改进比如说leader,leaveawonderfulimpression不符英语表达习惯; 4.第一段不够简洁。 (责任编辑:admin) |