2017高考英语作文如何备考，2016高考浙江卷优秀英语作文赏析
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高考英语作文是很多考生的难点，为了帮助大家更好的备考英语，小编整理出2016高考优秀英语作文赏析，希望考生能在历年优秀作文中学到高分经验，取得好成绩。  浙江卷英语作文题目： “Planning is good，but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。 要求如下： 1.简述你对这句名言的理解； 2.用一个具体事例加以说明； 3.给出恰当的结尾。 注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）；2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。 【优秀满分范文】 Planning Is Good ，But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event，I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that，I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined. 【名师点睛】 本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail ， bear no fruit ，carry out， set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do ， It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。 考点：考查开放式作文 (责任编辑：admin) |